Comments on Enterprise Profile Presentations

Here are some brief comments on the Enterprise profile presentations.  Looking at these and remembering the presentations will help you prepare for you presentation next week.


G.O.D.

Beautiful presentation design.  Strong Content.  Good transitions between elements.  Well prepared using notes.

TVB

Good presentation design.  Good quick coverage of history and ways they make money.  Good review of business connections.

CAA

Be careful about reading the content on the slides.  Good item connecting the various elements of the business.

Ogilvy Mather

Don't read the content on the slides.  Too much detail in the history and that made the presentation run long.

ATV

Don't read the content on the slides.  Too much detail in the history.  Good description of relationships.  I learned something from hearing this presentation.

Postgal

Good use of a storytelling angle to engage the audience.  Good preview of content.  Don't read the content on the slides.  Came away with a good understanding of the enterprise and its business.  

TBWA

Really well structured presentation and a very nice job following the guidelines and engaging the audience.  Good content, informative and interesting.  Still needed to edit the whole thing down to come closer to fitting the time.

Bliss

Too much time on the history.  Good analysis of decision-making.  Learned a lot from this presentation.

Alan Chan

Focused well and used the time well to deliver interesting content.

Leo Burnett

Presentation is full of information.  Good job focusing the information in the presentation.

Many Many

Good looking presentation.  Be careful reading the content on the slides.  Good job on the history.

STAR

Good history.  Don't hide behind the podium.  Needed more information about the current business of the enterprise.

Apple

Good preview.  Good history.  Good use of the slides as you left me wanting to spend more time with them rather than hoping that I could get to the next slide.  Great description of the brand.

YUco

Need to be sure to practice the presentation.  Good coverage of the enterprise in the presentation.  Good looking presentation.  Lots of good information in the presentation.

XD Comm

If the information is not easily available then you need to find it in some other way.  There needs to be more depth in the information.

Pill & Pillow

Good structure and Good design for the presentation.  Need to be sure that all of the information is clear and understandable on its own and in connection with the other pieces of information in the presentation.  

I will post the presentation order a little later.

- Dr. W -